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-*'''Rena''': ''This place is...!''
+*'''Rena''': ''This is...!''
-*'''Chung''': ''Henir energy!''
+*'''Chung''': ''Henir energy?!''
-*'''Ain''': ''With this much Henir energy, this is practically the same as being inside Henir's domain. Haha... I'm getting nervous.''
+*'''Ain''': ''This potency... The Demon Realm must be completely under the influence of Henir, My, isn't this exciting?''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Huh? It's much more bearable than I thought. My body feels a bit heavy, but it's not too bad.''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Henir energy is weighing down on my body... but it's more manageable than I thought...''
-*'''Ciel''': ''It could mean we've become that much stronger. All that training is paying off.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''That means we are stronger, right? Looks like all that training was worth the effort.''
-*'''Eve''': 'But it doesn't change the fact that it's dangerous. We'll be extinguished if we are exposed to it for too long.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Still, the Demon Realm is dangerous. If we are exposed to this much Henir energy for too long, we would likely perish.''
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-*'''Ara''': ''We are in a hurry...''
+*'''Ara''': ''We need to find a way out of here...''
-*'''Chung''': ''But it's dark everywhere...''
+*'''Chung''': ''But it's too dark...''
-*'''Ciel''': ''And have no idea where we are.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''Didn't we pass this place just a moment ago?''
-*'''Ain''': ''Do you sense anything Ms. Demon? My legs are starting to ache...''
+*'''Ain''': ''Miss Demon, can't you sense anything? My legs are getting tired...''
-*'''Lu''': ''Stop whining. You're distracting me. Uuuugh... There! It's that way!''
+*'''Lu''': ''Hmph! Stop making such a fuss! You are distracting me! Grrrr... Over there, that way!''
 *'''Elsword''': ''......''
-*'''Ain''': ''Hmm? Do you have something to tell me Elsword?''
+*'''Ain''': ''Hm? You look like you have something to say, Elsword.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Ah, yes. I was gonna say we can stop to rest if you want, so don't overwork yourself.''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Ah, it's nothing. Just... If you're feeling tired, we could always take a rest. No need to push yourself.''
-*'''Ain''': ''Haha, to think there would come a day where I hear that from you first... I better try harder? I'm still fine so don't worry.''
+*'''Ain''': ''Haha, I never thought I'd worry you so much. I'd have to make sure to 'step up my game'. Don't worry. I'm feeling fine.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''I thought there wouldn't be any lifeforms here since this was Henir's domain. But what were those monsters just now?''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Since this is Henir's domain, I didn't think there would be anything alive. But that thing...''
-*'''Raven''': ''Can you even call them lifeforms? It felt like fighting a stone.''
+*'''Raven''': ''... I don't know if you should call that thing alive. All I know is that it was as hard as a rock.''
-*'''Eve''': ''No way... these are... very contradicting existences.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Fascinating... These beings are truly contradictory.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Eve, did you find out something?''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Did you find something, Eve?''
-*'''Eve''': ''After analyzing them using the data we gathered from Elrianode, I found out that 98% of these monster's composition is Henir's power. It's to the point where if the concepts of extinction and chaos had a form, they would look like them.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Based on the data we collected in Elrianode, these monsters are comprosed of 98% Henir energy. Essentially, these beings are manifestations of chaos and destructin.''
-*'''Add''': ''Extinction that returns everytihng to nothing, chaos that disrupts whatever that's whole. An existence made of those powers that actually 'has a form'... That's not even funny. And we have to leave such intriguing specimens behind...''
+*'''Add''': ''Destruction, which turns everything to nothing, chaos which scatters anything that is whole, and a 'manifestation' composed of destruction and chaos... A contradiction indeed. Shame we have to leave this fascinating test subject behind...''
-*'''Chung''': ''Life comes first before research!''
+*'''Chung''': ''Safety comes before research, come one!''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Everyone wait!''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Wait, stop!''
 *'''Aisha''': ''......''
 *'''Rena''': ''......''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Huh? Strange... I thought I sensed something...''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Huh, weird... I thought I felt something...''
-*'''Aisha''': ''Why did you do that all of a sudden?! You surprised me.''
+*'''Aisha''': ''Ooooh, what was that for?! I thought my heart was going to stop.''
-*'''Raven''': ''Looks like everything is fine around here. Let's keep moving.''
+*'''Raven''': ''I don't sense anything. Let's move one.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''... Yeah.''
+*'''Elsword''': ''... sure.''
-*''(Grrrr Thump-!)''
+*''(Rrrrrrr Click-!)''
-*'''Chung''': ''Platforms appeared here!''
+*'''Chung''': ''Here! A stepping pad!''
-*'''Aisha''': ''I was prepared for the worst... but I never thought we'd be wandering inside Henir's domain where not a single path can be seen.''
+*'''Aisha''': ''I knew things wouldn't be easy... But I never thought we would be lost in Henir's domain without a way out.''
-*'''Eve''': ''Be careful. You can never come back if you fall down from here. I'll attempt a rescue operation to the best of my abilities, but depending on the circumstances... I might just have to give up.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Watch your step. If you fall, there is no coming back. Of course we'll try our best to rescue anyone who falls... But some situations call for sacrifices.''
-*'''Aisha''': ''That's so cruel!!''
+*'''Aisha''': ''That's brutal!''
-*'''Eve''': ''Haha, it was a joke. How did you like my new speech pattern?''
+*'''Eve''': ''Huhu, I am joking. I believe I am getting a hang of this 'humor'.''
-*''(Kreeeak- grrrr-)''
+*''(Keee- Screeeech-))''
-*'''Aisha''': ''Eeeek! What was that sound?! It wasn't just me who heard that right?''
+*'''Aisha''': ''Uaaah, what was that?! Did anyone else hear that?''
-*'''Rena''': ''I heard it too! Was it a monster...?''
+*'''Rena''': ''I heard it too! Could it be...?''
-*''(Wrr-)''
+*''(Whooosh-)''
 *'''Rena''': ''!''
 *'''Aisha''': ''!''
 *'''Eve''': ''!''
-*'''Ara''': ''Above us...!''
+*'''Ara''': ''U, up there...!''
-*'''Ciel''': ''Shh, it doesn't look like something we should mess with. Was that what Elsword sensed earlier?''
+*'''Ciel''': ''Quiet, this one looks tough. It seems this is the guy that Elsword sensed earlier.''
-*'''Raven''': ''... Looks like it's gone. Did it not see us?''
+*'''Raven''': ''... It's gone. Did it not see us?''
-*'''Ciel''': ''Or it must have judged that we were not worth it attention.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''Or maybe we're not even worth a bother.''
-*'''Lu''': ''Everyone look over there! I can practically smell the Demon Realm beyond this strange wall.''
+*'''Lu''': ''Look! I can smell the Demon Realm beyond this strange wall.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''You were using smell to look for it...?''
+*'''Elsword''': ''You were... looking through smell...?''
-*'''Lu''': ''It was a figure of speech! Let's hurry.''
+*'''Lu''': ''I meant figuratively. Come on!''
-*'''Rena''': ''Everyone, be careful to not get separated.''
+*'''Rena''': ''Everyone, make sure we stay together.''
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