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 The prophet who reads the repeating flow of history and delivers the voice of the world.
-As her senses became more acute in Elriabrunnr, the spirits’ voices have become clearer than ever.
+Her senses became more acute in Elriabrunnr.<br>The spirits’ voices have become clearer than ever.
-Finally, Rena could see that everything in the world had patterns and flow, just like how words had rhyme and rhythm.
+Now, Rena could see that everything in the world had patterns and flow, just like how words had rhyme and rhythm.
 With newfound power, came newfound responsibility.
-Rena gladly accepted the responsibility, for the spirits, her friends, and all the connections she made.
+For the spirits who came to her, her friends, and all the connections she made, Rena gladly accepted the responsibility.
-Combined with her senses and the wisdom of the spirits, she has become the prophet that foresee dangers and lead the world.
+With her senses and the wisdom of the spirits, she will become the prophet that foresee dangers and lead the world.
-Rena’s song becomes the opening to a new era!
+Rena's song becomes the opening to a new era.
 |KR='새로운 이야기의 서막을… 열 때가 되었어.'