Story/Laby Chapter 2: Difference between revisions

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 After arriving to the confines of Velder, Laby and Bellonde tries to get a ship, but they learn that the port has been recently attacked by monsters.
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 *{{StoryIcon|?}} '''Sailor:''' ''We're under attack!!! Monsters!!''
 *{{StoryIcon|Gaia}} '''Bellonde:''' ''Monsters? There shouldn't be any monsters en route...''
-*{{StoryIcon|Laby}} '''Laby:''' ''Teacher! There's bunch of weirdos climbing on the ship! As many as hair on Laby's head!''
+*{{StoryIcon|Laby}} '''Laby:''' ''Teacher! There's a bunch of weirdos climbing on the ship! As many as the hairs on Laby's head!''
 *{{StoryIcon|Laby}} '''Laby:''' ''Those weirdos! They're breaking everything on the ship!! Can Laby go teach them a lesson?''
 *{{StoryIcon|Gaia}} '''Bellonde:''' ''Go ahead, don't let them on the ship!!''
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