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 *''Sparring match with Second Brother from before kept coming up in my mind every time I swung my spear.''
 *'''Ara:''' ''(That's right... Mother will be troubled... If I had attacked Second Brother and somehow hurt him.)''
-*''Even though I thought it was for the best in the corner of my mind, there was always me who was regretting stopping my hand at that moment whenever I came to my senses. I struggled to hide this feeling but only a very frustrated emotion remained in the end.''
+*''Even though I thought it was for the best in the corner of my mind, there was always me who was regretting stopping my hand at that moment whenever I came to my senses.''
-*''How I couldn't live openly with my head held high was frustrating and my mother being pained because of the other siblings was frustrating as well. But most of all, how I couldn't beat the other siblings in something I was most confident at was most frustrating.''
+*''I struggled to hide this feeling but only a very frustrated emotion remained in the end.''
+*''How I couldn't live openly with my head held high was frustrating and my mother being pained because of the other siblings was frustrating as well.''
+*''But most of all, how I couldn't beat the other siblings in something I was most confident at was most frustrating.''
 *'''Ara:''' ''(It's not fine... It's frustrating...)''
 *''Tears that I tried to hold back burst open. It has been so long since I cried out loud. And after sitting down on the spot and wiping my eyes for a bit, now I even felt angry.''
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 *''Stream of tears that didn't show any signs of stopping instantly stopped when a familiar voice came from beside me.''
 *'''Ara:''' ''O, of course... I, I'm fine!''
-*''I stood up hastily while wiping my tears to see Elder Brother Aren with a worried expression. Elder Brother Aren handed me a handkerchief and stood beside me without saying a word until I calmed down.''
+*''I stood up hastily while wiping my tears to see Elder Brother Aren with a worried expression.''
+*''Elder Brother Aren handed me a handkerchief and stood beside me without saying a word until I calmed down.''
 *'''Ara:''' ''I'm sorry... I showed you myself being so unsightly.''
 *'''Aren:''' ''No, I fully understand. Everyone has particularly difficult times...''
-*''Elder Brother Aren who was picking up my spear from the ground below his feet made a quite serious expression. I took the spear and thanked him as I took couple steps in order to leave quickly. But I couldn't go far because I had no choice but to stop from Elder Brother Aren's words.''
+*''Elder Brother Aren who was picking up my spear from the ground below his feet made a quite serious expression.''
+*''I took the spear and thanked him as I took couple steps in order to leave quickly. But I couldn't go far because I had no choice but to stop from Elder Brother Aren's words.''
 *'''Aren:''' ''Would you like to have a proper sparring match with me?''
 *''As I pondered for a while thinking about what I should say in order to refuse without being disrespectful, Elder Brother Aren challenged me to a sparring match one more time.''
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 *''Elder Brother Aren swung his sword strongly as he pressured me without showing even a slight hint of openings. I had to focus all my strength on blocking Elder Brother's attacks.''
 *'''Aren:''' ''This shouldn't be all there is to your skills! Try more seriously!''
-*''I was gradually pushed back and fell into a position where I couldn't escape anymore because I had my back to a giant tree. I was looking for a chance to try and escape to a more open area when Elder Brother's sword approached me again.''
+*''I was gradually pushed back and fell into a position where I couldn't escape anymore because I had my back to a giant tree.''
-*''I couldn't dodge it. I had to face it instead. I saw an opening in Elder Brother's attack for just a very slight instant. I quickly blocked the sword with my spear then attacked Elder Brother's side with the back of my spear. Then I turned around as I raised the spear. My spear had approached the tip of Elder Brother's chin.''
+*''I was looking for a chance to try and escape to a more open area when Elder Brother's sword approached me again.''
+*''I couldn't dodge it. I had to face it instead. I saw an opening in Elder Brother's attack for just a very slight instant.''
+*''I quickly blocked the sword with my spear then attacked Elder Brother's side with the back of my spear. Then I turned around as I raised the spear. My spear had approached the tip of Elder Brother's chin.''
+[[File:Brother_%26_I_4-1.png|250px]]
 *'''Ara:''' ''H... how... can this...?''
+[[File:Brother_%26_I_4-2.png|250px]]
 *'''Aren:''' ''Amazing... I lost. It's my defeat.''
 *''Elder Brother Aren smiled joyfully as he dropped his sword. My movements just now were exactly the same as the movements I had always drawn in my mind.''
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 == Gallery ==
 <gallery widths=150px heights=150px>
-File:Brother_%26_I_4.png|Brother & I 4.
+File:Brother_%26_I_4-1.png|Brother & I 4
+File:Brother_%26_I_4-2.png|Brother & I 4
 </Gallery>
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