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+|PrevLink=Story/Side Story/Raven's Story 1
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 |HeaderColor={{ColorSel|Character|Raven}}
 |QuestType=SideStory
-|QuestName= Short Story of Memories 5
+|QuestName= A Piece of Memory 5
 |Requirement=
--
+*Complete the quest [[Story/Side Story/Raven's Story 1|A Piece of Memory 4]]
 |Objectives=
 *Clear 5 dungeons within level range (excluding Ruben/Henir/Ereda)
 |Description= Even after the mock siege warfare, our team stayed together.
 |QuestCD=
-*'''Seris:''' ''I…. I can't….anymore….''
+*'''Seris:''' ''I... I can't….anymore...''
-*''Seris dropped to sit down and panted heavily. Owen grabbed Seris' hand with a dissatisfied expression and pulled her back up but Seris dropped to sit back down and caught her breath. After the day of the mock siege warfare, three of us usually met up and trained together. Ever since we finished mock siege warfare, Owen said that his ideal team had been so close by and started to refer to us as a 'team'.
+*''Seris dropped to sit down and panted heavily. Owen grabbed Seris' hand with a dissatisfied expression and pulled her back up but Seris dropped to sit back down and caught her breath.''
+*''After the day of the mock siege warfare, three of us usually met up and trained together. Ever since we finished mock siege warfare, Owen said that his ideal team had been so close by and started to refer to us as a 'team'.
 *'''Owen:''' ''Here, water. Today's training is over if you just finish one more set.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''But….. that's what you said before….!''
+*'''Seris:''' ''But... that's what you said before...!''
-*''Seris instantly gulped down the water Owen handed to her then got back up to barely finish one more set and dropped to lie down this time. Owen and I looked at each other and shrugged then we went to sit beside Seris.''
+*''Seris instantly gulped down the water Owen handed to her then got back up to barely finish one more set and dropped to lie down this time.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Owen's training is…. Is way too strict…''
+*''Owen and I looked at each other and shrugged then we went to sit beside Seris.''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Owen's training is... Is way too strict...''
 *'''Owen:''' ''You shouldn't have teamed up with me with such a small resolve.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''I didn't think it would be like this at the time.''
-*''Seris gave a sidelong scowl at Owen then raised her body to sit and wiped the sweat off her forehead. She did always complain but Seris was diligently following Owen's training routine. Owen's training routine was difficult but it was structured methodically to fit individual's strong and weak points so Seris's skills were increasing day by day. Seris wasn't the first girl to enroll in a military academy, but instructors all praised her by saying they've never seen a girl this enthusiastic. But she also became a target of jealousy for some students at the same time.''
+*''Seris gave a sidelong scowl at Owen then raised her body to sit and wiped the sweat off her forehead. She did always complain but Seris was diligently following Owen's training routine. Owen's training routine was difficult but it was structured methodically to fit individual's strong and weak points so Seris's skills were increasing day by day.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''Seris… why did you come to this military academy…. You could have had easier life…''
+*''Seris wasn't the first girl to enroll in a military academy, but instructors all praised her by saying they've never seen a girl this enthusiastic. But she also became a target of jealousy for some students at the same time.''
+*'''Raven:''' ''Seris... why did you come to this military academy... You could have had easier life...''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Because I think that I should be the one who constructs my life.''
 *''Seris drew an unrecognizable picture with her finger on the ground as she continued speaking.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''You would normally have to marry somebody picked by your household when you become a certain age right? I absolutely loathed that. What about my freedom? My will? Is a life where I cannot choose anything freely a life at all?  I thought about it carefully and concluded that kind of life was no good. Of course, life here is difficult too, but still…. on the day when I fought together with you guys, I finally felt that I was alive.''
+*'''Seris:''' ''You would normally have to marry somebody picked by your household when you become a certain age right? I absolutely loathed that. What about my freedom? My will? Is a life where I cannot choose anything freely a life at all?''
+*'''Seris:''' ''I thought about it carefully and concluded that kind of life was no good. Of course, life here is difficult too, but still... on the day when I fought together with you guys, I finally felt that I was alive.''
 *''Seris smiled like a child then looked back and forth between Owen and my faces.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''(I understand now that….. not all nobles are greedy as I thought.)''
+*'''Raven:''' ''(I understand now that... not all nobles are greedy as I thought.)''
 *''My narrow-minded thought from when I first came here started to gradually change because of Seris. Maybe that girl's positive personality was affecting me.''
 *'''Owen:''' ''Then you have even less time to rest. I'll have you enter special training course starting tomorrow.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''What??? No way… I can't… no, I won't! Look, my legs are shaking this much already…''
+*'''Seris:''' ''What??? No way… I can't… no, I won't! Look, my legs are shaking this much already...''
 *'''Owen:''' ''You're overreacting. You should at least be able to handle one person's worth to remain in our team.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Seriously… you're too harsh….''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Seriously... you're too harsh...''
-*'''Raven:''' ''(Although he sometimes spouts out harsh words as if they are nothing…. That must be his way of caring for his friends.)''
+*'''Raven:''' ''(Although he sometimes spouts out harsh words as if they are nothing... That must be his way of caring for his friends.)''
 *''Owen had a completely opposite personality from Seris. He was calm, rational and calculative but he gave an absolute trust towards people that he thought was on his side.''
 *'''Owen:''' ''Don't just sit there smiling like an idiot and take this.''
 *''Owen also handed me a note filled with very dense writings as he stood up.''
 *'''Owen:''' ''Raven, you're entering a special training course too. You should raise your strength whenever you can after all. Two of you, don't waste any effort so that I can make use of you guys more effectively.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''Ugh….''
+*'''Raven:''' ''Ugh...''
 *'''Seris:''' ''What's the use if we die in the process?!''
 *'''Owen:''' ''People don't die from just this much Seris. Don't worry, I'll immediately call for a medic if you collapse during training.''
 *''Looking at Owen give a scary smile and starting to coach Seris's training again, I raised my blade also.''
 }}
 {{Quest
 |HeaderColor={{ColorSel|Character|Raven}}
 |QuestType=SideStory
-|QuestName= Short Story of Memories 6
+|QuestName= A Piece of Memory 6
 |Requirement=
--
+*Complete the quest '''A Piece of Memory 5'''
 |Objectives=
 *Clear 5 dungeons within level range (excluding Ruben/Henir/Ereda)
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 *''We could see Owen with his arms full of books heading to the library. Seris ran towards Owen with cheerful footsteps.''
 *'''Seris:''''' Good morning Owen!! Where are you going? Library? You're studying even on a day off?''
-*'''Raven:''' ''They look heavy….''
+*'''Raven:''' ''Look heavy...''
 *'''Owen:''' ''It's fine.''
 *''Owen always had books near him. He didn't let go of books even during training.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Wow~ you finished this many books in just one night? That's amazing.''
-*'''Owen:''' ''Most important thing in coming up with strategies is to widen your field of view. It's easier to think flexibly if you know more, and you'll be able to see sides that you couldn't see before. So you two should do some reading when you have free time….''
+*'''Owen:''' ''Most important thing in coming up with strategies is to widen your field of view. It's easier to think flexibly if you know more, and you'll be able to see sides that you couldn't see before. So you two should do some reading when you have free time...''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Ugh… nagger….''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Ugh… Nagger...''
 *''Seris covered her ears and distanced herself from Owen. Owen made two fake coughs then continued speaking as if he didn't mind.''
 *'''Owen:''' ''There were lots of books that I haven't read before in this library. I'll recommend one to each of you so try reading them.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''I don't like reading….''
+*'''Seris:''' ''I don't like reading...''
 *''Seris hung onto me as her body became loose. She then snatched one of Owen's books and started to examine its contents.''
-*'''Owen:''' ''…. Recently, I've been thinking that I'm really glad to have come to this school, and met you two.''
+*'''Owen:''' ''... Recently, I've been thinking that I'm really glad to have come to this school, and met you two.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''What are you saying all of a sudden?''
 *'''Owen:''' ''When I'm alone, I somehow keep getting thoughts that how it would have been if I didn't come to this place, what I would be doing otherwise. I probably would have been spending my days blaming my own circumstances and my family.''
-*'''Owen:''' ''I also wouldn't have met you two. And….''
+*'''Owen:''' ''I also wouldn't have met you two. And...''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Owen… you were always speaking so bluntly but you've been caring about after all! Haha, I think that I was fortunate to have met you guys too!''
 *''Seris hung onto Owen's back this time and placed the book she was holding back on top of Owen's pile of books. My gaze unknowingly turned towards Seris face as she smiled joyfully.''
-*'''Owen:''' ''…. No, it's not that…. I was just saying that I would have regretted missing out on such useful chess pieces.''
+*'''Owen:''' ''... No, it's not that... I was just saying that I would have regretted missing out on such useful chess pieces.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Chess pieces…..? That's so harsh…''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Chess pieces...? That's so harsh...''
 *''Seris pouted as if she was very disappointed at Owen's words then turned the topic around and asked me.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Then how about you Raven?''
 *'''Raven:''' ''My thoughts are the same.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Raven, even you too.... as chess pieces….''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Raven, even you too... as chess pieces...''
 *'''Raven:''' ''No, I meant that it was an unparalleled fortune to have met you two.''
 *''Seris who had been pouting again walked couple steps without saying anything, she then shouted in a loud voice as she hung onto my neck.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Wow…. Wow….! Raven… I'm so moved…!''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Wow... Wow...! Raven… I'm so moved...!''
 *'''Owen:''' ''You say such embarrassing words so easily. We're here. Be quiet in the library.''
 *''Owen shook his head and entered the library, leaving behind me who was struggling because of Seris. It must have been just my imagination but it looked as if a smile that I haven't seen on Owen before was hanging on his mouth.''
 }}
 {{Quest
 |HeaderColor={{ColorSel|Character|Raven}}
 |QuestType=SideStory
-|QuestName= Short Story of Memories 7
+|QuestName= A Piece of Memory 7
 |Requirement=
--
+*Complete the quest '''A Piece of Memory 6'''
 |Objectives=
 *Clear 5 dungeons within level range (excluding Ruben/Henir/Ereda)
 |Description= I don't know when it had started, but I had been following that person.
 |QuestCD=
+[[File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-1.png|250px]]
 *'''Seris:''' ''Shh, be quiet.''
 *''Seris silently followed behind Owen and approached right behind his back.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Even the expressionless Owen might make a funny face if he's surprised. Raven, you want to see too right?''
+[[File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-2.png|250px]]
 *''Seris put her finger in front of her mouth as she made a mischievous smile. She then carefully raised both of her hands above Owen's head. Smile unknowingly formed on my mouth at how childish she looked.''
-*'''Seris:''' ''Woah!!!''
+*'''Seris:''' ''Rawr!!!''
 *''Seris's shout rang out across the quiet library. Thankfully, there was no one else using the library this early in the day. I eased my mind and turned my gaze towards where Seris and Owen were.''
-*'''Owen:''' ''…''
+*'''Owen:''' ''...''
 *''We couldn't see any change in expression from Owen. Seris muttered with a very disappointed expression as she looked up at Owen.''
 *'''Seris:''' ''What, you're no fun.''
 *'''Owen:''' ''Keep quiet in the library. Isn't it also written in the entrance?''
 *'''Seris:''' ''Alright, enough nagging!''
-*''Seris pouted and gave a sidelong glare at Owen then turned her gaze towards me. She was making a childish smile as if she had never pouted. Ah… it's that smile again. It was a face I've always seen but Seris's smiling face felt good to watch every time. It had the power to make others smile along with her.''
+*''Seris pouted and gave a sidelong glare at Owen then turned her gaze towards me. She was making a childish smile as if she had never pouted.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''(She was smiling when I first met her, also when we were victorious in siege warfare, when we were training together and when walked around the school together, always…)''
+*''Ah… it's that smile again. It was a face I've always seen but Seris's smiling face felt good to watch every time. It had the power to make others smile along with her.''
+*'''Raven:''' ''(She was smiling when I first met her, also when we were victorious in siege warfare, when we were training together and when walked around the school together, always...)''
 *''I was always seeking Seris's face. And the moment when I realized this fact was….. for some reason today. Today that was supposed to be particularly no different than any other days, this moment right now.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''(… Why am I feeling like this now….?)''
+*'''Raven:''' ''(... Why am I feeling like this now...?)''
 *''Why now….? I had no ways to explain. But it didn't take too long for me to collect my feelings, my emotions and accept them.''
-*'''Raven:''' ''(I see… that girl… I….)''
+*'''Raven:''' ''(I see... that girl... I...)''
 *''I must like that girl. Seris was approaching me while smiling just like the days before.''
 |CImage1=[[File:Pendulum of Memories.png]]
 |CReward1=[[Pendulum of Memories]]
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 == Gallery ==
 <gallery widths=150px heights=150px>
-File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-1.png|Short Story of Memories 7.
+File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-1.png|A Piece of Memory 7.
-File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-2.png|Short Story of Memories 7.
+File:Short_Story_of_Memories_7-2.png|A Piece of Memory 7.
 </Gallery>
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