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I think the background changes actully made a bit less sense, lol.

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 === Background ===
-Wanting to atone for the sins he has committed, Raven decides to restrain  the power of his Nasod Arm.
+Wanting to atone for the sins he has committed, Raven decides to restrain the power of his Nasod Arm. By doing so, he becomes more controlled, sensible, and more sophisticated. Continuing to polish his skills with the sword, Raven quickly advances as the highest ranked swordsman, glorified with the title of "Blade Master". Quick as the wind, and a unique rhythmic attack that is only possible for the Blade Master.
-By doing so, he becomes more controlled, sensible, and wiser. Continuing to polish his skills with the sword, Raven quickly advances as the highest-ranking swordsman in Velder.
-Quick as the wind, a unique rhythmic attack that is only possible for the Master Swordsman,
+He attacks are so swift, that his opponents do not even realize they have been cut. His blade is so sharp and deadly, he can cut through steel as if it was paper.
-He attacks are so swift that his opponents don't even realize they've been cut.
+Lightweight, elegant movements and spectacular swordplay, the Master Swordsman!
-His blade is so sharp and deadly, he can cut through steel as if it was paper.
-Lightweight, elegant movements mixed with spectacular swordplay, this is, the '''Blade Master!''' <br>
 ===Quotes===