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 === Appearance ===
-Raven is a tall and handsome man with tanned skin, his body is covered with scars from his past battles, he has black spiked hair and orange eyes, he lost his left arm when he tried to fight and escape the Velder guards, however his missing arm has been replaced with a robotic arm made of Nasod, it has very sharp claws and can handle a high amount of heat, he has black pants with metallic shoes and spikes, as well as a brown belt, he has a glove that completely covers his right arm with some metallic patterns, he wears a black collar too.
+Raven is a tall, tan-skinned man with scars covering his body and face. He has black spiked hair and orange eyes. He lost his left arm when he tried to fight and escape the Velder guards, which has been replaced by a Nasod Arm. The arm has sharp claws and can handle a large amount of heat. He wears black pants, metallic shoes, a brown belt, a black collar, and a glove that completely covers his right arm with some metallic patterns.
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 === Personality ===
-Raven is rather a calm and confident person when not fighting, the deaths of his fiancee Seris and his team in front of his eyes has made Raven to carry a burden of pain, however when fighting he is a furious, fast and violent fighter that won't think twice on destroying his enemies.
+Raven is rather a calm and confident person when he's not fighting. When he is fighting, he is a furious and violent fighter that won't think twice about destroying his enemies. The deaths of his fiancee Seris and his team in front of his eyes has made Raven to carry a burden of pain, however <br>
 == First Class Advancement  ==