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-*'''Chung''': ''I can see something over there!''
+*'''Chung''': ''I see something over there!''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Is that the exit leading to the Demon Realm?''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Is that the way to the Demon Realm?''
-*''(Screeeeech- gwrrrrrr-!)''
+*''(Keee- Screeeech-)''
-*'''Rose''': ''Raven! Behind you!!''
+*'''Rose''': ''Raven, behind you!!''
 *'''Raven''': ''Kugh!''
-*'''Ciel''': ''Are you okay!?''
+*'''Ciel''': ''Are you alright!?''
-*'''Raven''': ''I'm fine. That was a close one.''
+*'''Raven''': ''I'm fine. I shouldn't have let my guard down.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''It looks like we can't advance further unless we defeat that thing!''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Looks like we need to defeat that thing before we can move one!''
-*'''Add''': ''It's in a whole different level than the small fries from before! Be careful!''
+*'''Add''': ''This one is nothing like the ones we've encountered earlier! Stay alert!''
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-*'''Ciel''': ''Ugh, bigger hurdles keep appearing one after another.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''Ugh, it's just one problem after another...''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Is everyone okay?''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Is everyone alright?''
-*'''Elesis''': ''So and so. Phew, that was a bit too rough for a warm up.''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Somewhat. That was pretty tough.''
-*'''Eve''': ''I finished collecting the combat data. It's certainly the strongest existence that lives here.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Data analysis complete. That creature is the strongest among all that dwell in this area.''
-*'''Rose''': ''Let's retreat quickly before more enemies appear.''
+*'''Rose''': ''Let's move on before anything else comes.''
-*'''Raven''': ''Yes. Thanks for the assist back there.''
+*'''Raven''': ''Yes. And thank you for the save earlier.''
-*'''Rose''': ''I did what was obvious. I'm glad you're fine.''
+*'''Rose''': ''I've only done what I had to do. I'm glad you're safe.''
-*'''Raven''': ''Looking at how you give ranged support, it seems you're experience in battle strategies.''
+*'''Raven''': ''Do you have a background in tactics? You seem to know what you were doing, when you fell back to support.''
-*'''Rose''': ''I'm honored that you recognized it! I often use ranged firearms so I do much research in that department.''
+*'''Rose''': ''Indeed, I'm glad you noticed! Since I specialize in guns and other long-range artillery, I tend to fall back to make most use of my abilities.''
-*'''Add''': ''Hmm...this thing. It doesn't have any combat abilities, but it seems to have a useful navigation feature.''
+*'''Add''': ''Hm... And this tin can is surprisingly useful as a navigation system, even though it's useless as a battle unit.''
-*'''Zero''': ''Hey you! Why do you keep looking at me strangely? What are you planning? W-What is that device you just took out? Are you planning to dismantle me?! Rose!!! Hurry up and protect me!!!''
+*'''Zero''': ''Hey you, stop staring at me like that. What are you, wait-what's that? Are you planning to take me apart?! ROOOOSE! HEEELP!! PROTECT ME RIGHT THIS INSTANT!!!!''
-*'''Rose''': ''And this bullet is one of the latest modification to my equipment...''
+*'''Rose''': ''For example, this grenade was recently developed to...''
-*'''Zero''': ''You're ignoring me?!''
+*'''Zero''': ''Oi! Stop ignoring me!''
-*'''Eve''': ''El powered AI made from another world... how intriguing.''
+*'''Eve''': ''Fascinating, an AI powered by the El, created in a different dimension...''
-*'''Zero''': ''Eeeeeek!''
+*'''Zero''': ''Gyaaaaa!''
-*'''Rena''': ''Haha, it's nice that they got used to each other quickly.''
+*'''Rena''': ''Haha, seems everyone is getting along.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''They seem helpful in combat for now. I'll have to observe them a bit longer though.''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Well, I have to admit she is useful in battle. Though I don't know if I can trust her yet.''
-*'''Rena''': ''Being cautious is good, but you might become biased if you always think so negatively. Although I'm sure you already know that, Elesis.''
+*'''Rena''': ''Being cautious is fine, but do make sure you're not always thinking of her negatively. You might become biased, thought I'm sure you know best.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''I don't think Rose is a bad person either. I'm just saying it will take more time to figure her out completely.''
+*'''Elesis''': ''... I don't think she's a bad person. I just think we need more time to figure out what kind of person she is.''
-*'''Rena''': ''Hahaha. Our Red Knight Captain is always so dependable~''
+*'''Rena''': ''Huhuhu, that's why we always rely on our Captain of the Red Knights.''
-*'''Lu''': ''So that was why you were cautious of me too~ Ohoho, how cute~''
+*'''Lu''': ''Ohoho is that why you were so wary of me as well? Aren't you just adorable~''
-*'''Elesis''': ''Ugh...''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Errr...''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Haha, let's all stop teasing my sister and get out of here. I somehow have a bad feeling...''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Haha, come on everyone, let's stop the chit chat and move on. Something doesn't feel...''
-*''Kreeaaaak- Grrrr- Kreeeeek--!!)''
+*''(Keeee- Screeeech- Keeeee--!!)''
-*'''Chung''': ''Ara!!''
+*'''Chung''': ''Ara!!!''
-*'''Ara''': ''Ugh..!''
+*'''Ara''': ''Kugh...!''
-*'''Aisha''': ''That thing! We should have completely defeated it!''
+*'''Aisha''': ''I thought we defeated that thing earlier!?''
-*'''Eve''': ''It didn't resurrect. We were just ambushed by another one of the same type of monster... N-No way... enemy numbers increasing rapidly! 10... 20... 50... 100?! This is bad! Everyone...!''
+*'''Eve''': ''It's not the same monster, it merely has the same appearance. Wait... Enemies approaching! 10... 20... 50... 100?! Danger level at critical point! Everyone wa..!!''
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-*'''Elsword''': ''Aisha! Eve! Chung! Ugh...!! Rena! Ara! Lu! Ciel! No...! Raven! Big sis, open your eyes! Ugh...! Ain! Rose! How.. did this...''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Aisha! Eve! Chung! Kugh...!! Rena! Ara! Lu! Ciel! Raven! Sis! Please! Open your eyes! Ugh...! Ain! Rose! No...''
-*''(Kreeeeeek- Krriiiik-!!!)''
+*''(Keeeeee- Keee-!!!)''
-*'''Elsword''': ''No... if I fall here... everyone will be...''
+*'''Elsword''': ''No... We can't... be...''
-*'''Aisha''': ''... sword! Elsword!! Come to your senses!''
+*'''Aisha''': ''... sword. Elsword!! Are you okay?''
 *'''Elsword''': ''?!''
-*'''Aisha''': ''Why were you spacing out like that? Let's hurry up and get out of here. Everyone is waiting.''
+*'''Aisha''': ''What are you zoning out for? Let's go, everyone's waiting.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''(What was... that just now...? Was I dreaming?)''
+*'''Elsword''': ''(What... was that...? A vision?)''
-*'''Aisha''': ''Did you get hurt while fighting that monster earlier... If something's wrong, don't worry about it all by yourself and tell me, alright?''
+*'''Aisha''': ''Did you hurt yourself earlier? ... If you're worried about anything, let us know, ok?''
-*'''Elsword''': ''...... Yes, I got it. Even though I'm not sure how much of a help you'd be, Aisha~''
+*'''Elsword''': ''...... Ok. Though I don't know how much help you would be~''
-*'''Aisha''': ''W-Why you little-!! You haven't got a taste of my fireball in a while huh?!''
+*'''Aisha''': ''What did you say-!! You want a taste of my magic?!''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Waaaah!''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Uuah!''
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