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-*'''Chloe''': ''You all look like you've seen a ghost.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''You look like you've seen a ghost.''
-*'''Rena''': ''Well that's because...''
+*'''Rena''': ''Well...''
-*'''Raven''': ''You chased and harassed us so tenaciously but then we never saw you after Hamel. So we thought you died.''
+*'''Raven''': ''When you've fought us at every corner only to disappear after Hamel, isn't it natural we thought you were dead?''
-*'''Chloe''': ''Did you think I was so weak that I'd drop dead with a flick of a finger just like you guys?''
+*'''Chloe''': ''If I were weak and naive like you lot maybe.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''... Could it be that you came to fight again? We won't lose so easily like last time.''
+*'''Elsword''': ''... Are you here to pick a fight? We won't go down easy this time.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''Elsword, wait. Chloe. No matter how strong you are, you should always at least keep one or two subordinates around if you still a general. This was also true when considering the strategies you used in Velder. But the Dark Elves we met earlier didn't seem related to you at all. They didn't seem to know the details on the Elrios invasion.''
+*'''Elesis''': ''Elsword, wait. Chloe, what are you doing all alone? You've always had a couple of elves with you when you were in Velder. Plus, the Dark Elves we've seen earlier didn't seem to know anything about the Demon invasion in Elrios.''
 *'''Chloe''': ''......''
-*'''Elesis''': ''Something must have happened, right?''
+*'''Elesis''': ''What's going on here?''
-*'''Chloe''': ''Why do I have to report every little detail like that to you guys?''
+*'''Chloe''': ''What, do I have a nanny now? Asking me what I'm doing every step of the way?''
-*'''Ciel''': ''You must not be aware of your positon here. Remember that we're the ones spending our time to listen to you.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''I don't think you understand the situation you're in. We are choosing to be courteous, but that could always change.''
-*'''Chloe''': ''Tch... I left the Demon Army. I'm not a general anymore.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''Tsk... I'm no longer a general of the Demon Army. In fact, I walked out of the army a while ago.''
-*'''Rose''': ''... Are you a deserter?''
+*'''Rose''': ''... A deserter?''
-*'''Chloe''': ''Hmph, call it whatever you'd like. I have business in the Dark Elf village.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''Hmph, call me what you want. I merely have business with the Dark Elves.''
-*'''Ara''': ''So there's a village nearby!''
+*'''Ara''': ''Is there a village nearby?''
-*'''Chloe''': ''... I was heading to the village when I heard all the noise coming from the treetop. But when I came to check, it was already after you idiots defeated the Red Guardian.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''... Yes, on the way to the village, I heard a commotion. When I came to check, you morons went ahead and killed the Red Guardian.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''Why shouldn't we have defeated this flower?''
+*'''Elsword''': ''What's so important about this flower?''
-*'''Chloe''': ''Sigh... you really don't know anything. Guardians are beings that represent the forest. They eliminate enemies in the place of trees that cannot move on their own. And Dark Elves, as another Guardian, were maintaining a symbiotic relationship with the Red Guardian. They must know there's an intruder by now. Even if you guys are useless, I'd appreciate it if you guys didn't get in my way at least.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''I can't believe I'm talking to these idiots. The Guardian represents the forest. It eliminates the enemies of the forest in place of the trees. The Dark Elves live in symbiotic relationship with the Red Guardian as the other guardian of the forest. By now, they probably know you're here. I can't believe you lot are still getting in my way.''
-*'''Add''': ''What did you just say?!''
+*'''Add''': ''What did you...!''
-*'''Rena''': ''Whoa whoa, calm down Add..!''
+*'''Rena''': ''Whoa, whoa, Add, calm down..!''
-*'''Raven''': ''I can't completely trust Chloe considering what she did in the past. But it looks like we need her help to escape this forest.''
+*'''Raven''': ''We can't fully trust her due to what happened in the past, but we need her help to get out of this forest.''
-*'''Ciel''': ''If we can clear the misunderstanding with the Dark Elves, we might be able to use the village as a temporary base.''
+*'''Ciel''': ''If we can just resolve our misunderstanding with the Dark Elves, we might be able to stay temporarily at their village.''
-*'''Elsword''': ''In that case...''
+*'''Elsword''': ''Then...''
-*'''Chloe''': ''I refuse.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''No.''
-*'''Aisha''': ''We didn't even say anything yet...''
+*'''Aisha''': ''We didn't even finish asking.''
-*'''Chloe''': ''It's obvious that you'll ask me to accompany you. I refuse.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''Isn't it obvious? I refuse to go anywhere with a bunch of nitwits.''
-*'''Elesis''': ''We need your knowledge and it's important for you to get to the village safely. If you don't like the term alliance, think of it as using each other.''
+*'''Elesis''': ''We need your knowledge of the area, and you need to arrive safely at the village. Let's just say we're using each other, if you don't like the idea of working together.''
-*'''Chloe''': ''...... Tch, fine.''
+*'''Chloe''': ''...... Tsk, fine.''
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