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 = Raven =
 === Specialty ===
-Raven is the Crow Mercenary Knights' captain turned rebel who eventually joins Elsword to help find the missing El. He is a close combat expert, using his powerful Nasod arm and a sword in his human hand to clobber and slash enemies. Able to inflict damage with a seemingly endless barrage of attacks, he leaves foes begging for mercy.
+Raven excels in close combat as he uses his Nasod arm to strike down enemies with a single blow to those who dare get near him. He also uses his sword to slice up anything in his path in order to build up all sorts of combos to tear down the enemy.
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 === Background ===
-Raven is a commoner from the [[Velder|Kingdom of Velder]] who worked hard to become the Captain of the Crow Mercenary Knights. Causing jealousy among the nobles, he was soon framed and sentenced to prison. His comrades and fiancée rescued him, and they all hid within the forest in the outskirts of Velder.
+Raven is a fellow commoner from the [[Velder|Kingdom of Velder]] who rejected the idea of nobles and aristocrats. However, he was still proud of his kingdom, and thus worked hard to become the Captain of the Crow Mercenary Knights. Being a commoner in such a high-ranking position, he caused jealousy among the nobles. It was just a matter of time before he was framed and sentenced to prison. His friends, comrades, and fiancée rescued him and hid within the forest in the outskirts of Velder.
-Unfortunately, Velder soldiers found them and eliminated them one by one. Raven stared at all the fallen bodies around him as he took what would have been his last few breaths. Just then, a [[Altera|Nasod]] figure appeared before him and everything turned black.
+It did not take long before they were all surrounded by Velder soldiers and slaughtered one by one. Everything that Raven cared for and loved was stripped away from him, right before his very eyes. He stared at all the dead bodies around him as he slowly took what would have been his last few breaths. Just then, a [[Altera|Nasod]] figure appeared before him offered Raven a contract, for rebirth and power, he would conquer Velder and have revenge on the ones who caused his suffering, Raven agreed, then blacked out.
-Raven awoke in a Nasod capsule, with devices attached to various parts of his body. Reborn with a Nasod arm and holding a blade on the right hand, he blindly fought to destroy the kingdom he once protected. Until one day, he met a crew of young, ambitious heroes who reminded him of his duty to defend his fellows. In atonement for his sins, he decides to join [[Elsword]] and his friends on a new life adventure of finding the missing El.
+Raven awoke in a Nasod capsule, with devices attached to various parts of his body. Reborn with a prototype Nasod claw, he becomes the leader of the Velder Rebellion and blindly fights to destroy the kingdom he once protected. That is until he met a crew of young, ambitious heroes who reminded him of his duty to protect the people he once loved. In atonement for his sins, he decides to join [[Elsword]] and his friends on a new life adventure of finding the missing El.
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 == First Class Advancement  ==
 [[File:RavenJobs.png|thumb|Raven's three job paths.|350px]]
-[[Raven]] is required to be Lv. 15 to begin his first class advancement.
+[[Raven]] is required to be Lv15 to begin his first class advancement.
 === Taker ===