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 === Background ===
-As a close-quarter combat specialist, Aisha is frustrated by her physical weaknesses even after utilizing the power of her mentor’s magical pendant. Luckily, as she spends time in Feita, she learns from Allegro’s scroll about the moonstones that usually fall onto Elrios around the time of the Harmony Festival – when forces of light and darkness are in balance. Moonstones that contain pure energy are rare, but having one can mean even greater abilities for the mage.
+Aisha finds the limits of her physique frustrating, as she struggles to grow as a magician and close combat specialist. While in Feita, Aisha gets a visit from Allegro, who gives her a scroll that tells of rare, pure-energy moonstones that fall onto Elrios around the time of the Harmony Festival.
-Aisha begins the search, and after much effort, she infuses her magical pendant with the moonstone’s power. This causes the immediate time-space to stop, and Aisha witnesses a mere foretelling of the great dimensional power that is now in her possession.
+The mage hunts for one, and after much effort, she infuses her magical pendant with the moonstone’s power. The resulting phenomenon—halting of the immediate spacetime—modestly foretells of the great power she has just acquired: the ability to control time and space dimensions. Thus she is then known as '''Dimension Witch''', the mage who can control time and space dimensions.
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